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"Can a hero save me?"
  by Pink Diamond101


This is "strictly" a love story. Not about a mutant or a Superman or Batman type of hero. If you read deeply, you will see that the hero is love (spoiler) lol

~~~~~~Can a hero save me?~~~~~~~~

I have liquidated all my worldly assets in exchange for my heart
which fell upon your dagger. cutting into me
layer by layer,
til i am almost bare.

Your eyes are cold and blackened by soot
The misguiding of your foot
led you astray
But you found your way

Into my dreams, where I sat alone
waiting for you to enter
who would've thought you'd become my tormentor
Dementia from a dementor
not the mentor
I hoped for
to teach me more

When I needed a hero, were you off rescuing others?
you left me to be smothered
by the dangers of these corners
The Earth's surface is getting warmer

Hell is waiting to rise to the top
my wrath wont stop
so I will not
Block
the fury
quite obscuring
yet alluring

The ground is boiling above me
I can't feel my face
I am wasted
by my placement
the substance of your everything
I wanted to be your basement

Where you keep your precious things
The memories it brings
You have disowned most if not all
within your soul
A wall
has built around your heart
I'm determined to tear apart

You must cave in
And tumble like Berlin
Receive what I'm giving to you then
Its the natural cost of living
A life for us to live in

Gastrointestinal complications
sickly waiting
for love to heal
a wound that isn't real
I made the pain
just to call your name

You came running, but stopped short
love on life support
you fell and hit the ground
but didn't make a sound
And where was I pray telll?
I, was on the other side of hell
still down
waiting for the hero to come and save me still
like he saved the others
I don't know if he will
leave me smothered
surrounded by smoke
I wear an invisible cloak
you cannot see me when I hurt
tho you hear my tears fall to the dirt

My hero where have you been?
I will not ask to be rescued again
The world is a very busy place
Even for a hero to find a space
in his time to rescue me
from agony

Unleash me
I'm beastly
look upon me with fear
I will show you why you should trust
with the failure between us
Can you really mend
A flawless sin?

A loophole in the time machine
go back in time and revisit me
find out what I am to be
But don't be long
for the hero in you will be gone
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Date Submitted: Nov 04, 2009 (07:16 PM)
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  BSavvy
11/05/09 (12:42 PM) 
OMG!!!! I am left speechless... This was wow!!!!! You did this justice from start to finish.... I get what you mean. And yes there are times we have someone we wish could just save us but only God can really do that but you penned this brilliantly. Must fav.

  S man J
11/05/09 (03:20 AM) 
then there's nothin like a hero,pliz next time call goddess angels.i like your poem

  Pink Diamond10...
11/04/09 (10:14 PM) 
yeah i don't think so either lol! in this drop the hero is a love interest.. and heck no he can't save me!

  Tonya
11/04/09 (10:08 PM) 
sorry mama no a hero cant save you...you have to save you...nice scribe

  Eternal Flow
11/04/09 (07:48 PM) 
YEs...A long poem..." when I need a hero, were you off rescuing others?" while reading this someone called me...and after I ended the conversation...I regret picking up the phone it interrupted my concentration..only to reiterate the importance of your words on this page..." you must cave in..." I wonder how someone can hear tears fall on dirt...I'd like to hear the sound that it would make..."can a hero save me?" I don't think so...

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