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"CAN I HAVE THE BOTH OF U?"
  by beautyjones
  - This Poem is a response to the poem She Chose Me by A.Renee


can i have the both of you,
i know yall love each other
but i need love too,
na i just got a fantasy i wanna explore
ain never had a threesome before
one is not enough i need two girls
my kittykat is hungry
it gone take two to make it purr.
i love yall 8 figures, donks, and d cups,
if yall down then thats wassup.
ain gone lie i love some good dick
but aint nothing like a good lick on the clit
and most niggas dont know how to do that shit
it takes another female to do the trick
now ain tryna cause problems between yall two,
once yall get a hold of this pussy
yall might fall in love wit me too
then it'll be one pussy lovin , tittie sucking triangle goin on,
but ain tryna mess up no happy home.
but come on now tell me the truth,
dont yall think ima cutie too,
you been checkin out my profile, you like my pics
i know you wanna get taste of my clit,
so whats up, yall gone make my fantasy come true,
tell me, can beauty have the both of you?
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Date Submitted: Mar 04, 2009 (01:42 PM)
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  LadylikeSoul
10/23/09 (01:33 AM) 
damn...whoa baby!!! lol this was just raw and uncut. no beating around the bush. nice flow.

  lala763
03/18/09 (03:23 PM) 
damn i liked this poem you flowed nice on it. i see you was spiting yo game to huh? i most admit that i likes. holla back at cha gurl.

  T.J.STA
03/12/09 (08:07 PM) 
Wowwwwww...You just raw with it, huh?? I like dat tho!! Keep spittin' that erotic fire ma & burn 'em up!!

  S.O.G.
03/07/09 (03:09 PM) 
look at you, sexy as you wanna write. I love the intensity that resides in your erotic pieces, I know that the way you write shows between the sheets is only 4 the grown folks. do the damn thang my fellow poet

  Aloni
03/05/09 (01:19 PM) 
whoa damn this is top notch.. real straight forward type shit... i digs this seriously

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