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"Can I Walk Wit You"
  by Bedo



Slow down lil shorty
Can I walk wit you
You lookin good in dem jeans
Can I talk to you
You were walkin pretty fast
You must be in a rush
You're too fine to pass me by
So stoppin you was a must
What's your name pretty thang
I hope you aint lyin
Bcuz your name suits your looks
You really are a diamond
Sit wit me on this bench
Your body got a nice scent
You're built to take my money
Fuck the mortgage and the rent
Is that a smile that I see?
God damn you're fine
You look too good to define
I know I got corny ass lines
But I want you to be mine
If lovin you was a crime
Lock me up and loose the keys
Shit, I'll serve the time
I don't normally do this
I'm a humble dude
I'm not sure if its rude
For me to ask for your number too
Well I guess that's your bus
Nice talkin to you
Thanx for your time
and for lettin me walk wit you

~Bedo~
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Date Submitted: Jan 01, 2007 (05:14 PM)
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  MIZZ.KILL WORD...
01/27/09 (03:43 PM) 
awww! 2 cute

  YuNeek
01/20/09 (06:16 PM) 
Aww Cute ass write. Kind of reminded me of a song too. hehe I really liked it and the flow was nice too. =) 10 stars

  smooch
07/03/08 (01:24 PM) 
this was so sweet i like this yes yes you can walk with me anytime you want to

  koolaid
02/23/08 (09:35 AM) 
this was sweet i liked it man keep pushind that pen..

  Littleg
12/26/07 (09:28 AM) 
i liked that one, "corny lines" that part was funny. great job on this one, i might check out your other poems. but as for this one i will give you ten stars.

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