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"Can I write a poem?"
  by drybaggij


Can I?
Can I write the word One
without someone in my box
asking why?
Could I say Un-
realistic
and not have some
folk wondering if they got my point
or missed it.
Can I say the word rant
Cuz I feel like I cant
without someone believing I'm likening them to an ant.
If I type the phrase violent candy
are you gonna stop reading and hit her?
Like "yo this cat is getting at you family"
For that matter Cat
Can I say kitty cat?
if I did would it focus my whole poem on that?
Can I please write a poem?
a heartfelt tale of love
unrequited
without someone who knows who i'm fucking
feeling slighted?
Can I pen a hot joint bout politics
without those that believe differently
feeling like I'm spitting hollow tips?
Cause I'd like to write a poem,
one that touches on touchy subjects
but if I categorize it as humor
I get folk who wanna internalize it.
Can I write a poem?
A jazzy lil ditty with a point
with an R&b track,
that I perhaps thought of while splifted my joint?
Could I drop it at 12
not to make sure you see it
but because I'm up at that hour
Or should I just write to agree with
everyone.
No fun!
Can I write how
My opinion of me is the grandest
without sounding stand offish?
Can I say aloud "I'm the best"
with out it starting ish?
Could I write that
a child was murdered by my hand
and expect you to understand
that it didn't really happen
that I was hip hopping and rapping?
Can I post my opinions
and trust that if you don't share them
that you keep your opinion to yourself,
unless you wish to wear them?
Can I write on my page,
and have the same amounts of views
as comments
( notice I said views as comments not the other way around )
Cause I know you read that shit
Just didn't wanna showcase that it made you vomit.
Can I sit here and pen all day
saying what I say in a way
that thumbs my nose?
Without wondering if I'm on toes
of some other creator of prose?
Can we all write poems
without a disclaimer to soften,
the sting that those that internalize feel
most often?
Don't I have a life?
Maybe I should ask if anyone else does?
Cause I'd like to write a poem
Without explaining where my mind was...

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Date Submitted: Nov 08, 2008 (12:34 PM)
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  Nika82blaq
07/10/09 (08:14 PM) 
I loved this piece...I also agree, to write just to write without and if and's and y's. You are a very talented writer. I enjoyed this, you spoke your mind in a way most don't.

  Siimply Poetic
07/02/09 (10:43 AM) 
Great write, you hard on this fam & I know it will will sound hot when u resite it. 10 stars

  Skyttles
05/22/09 (06:51 PM) 
I loved this I could agree with this. 10s and definitely a fav!

  ARCH ANGEL
04/19/09 (01:44 PM) 
Automatic fav...I like where you took this on...a slight satire it was...really gets the mind thinkn..sadly many of the people who comment..are the ones your speaking of lol...nice drop bruh not afraid to keep it real I see

  etheric9
03/11/09 (08:49 PM) 
Whatever is on that brilliant mind of yours. Please write, scribble, or draw just make sure you get it on here so I can read it. Love your work.

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