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"Can You..."
  by C.L.
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Can I…? by Ash B.


Can you do me well
Like a real should...
Can you treat me with the respect
that I give to you....
Can you be my other half... The air that I breath, my blood that pumps through my veins...
Can you keep me maintained when I feel as though im goin insane...
Can you be the right to my wrong...
Can you be my baby... That's crazy... Cause the love that pures out for you is so deadly...Can you be my love... all the way until the end of time
Can we talk... yes...
Can we start over... yes...
Can we be yes...
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Date Submitted: Sep 29, 2007 (10:50 PM)
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  piss a mofo of...
10/24/07 (07:48 PM) 
Great response to a great poem. short sweet and to the point but packed full of everything needed for nutrition..good job keep writin.

  El Diablo
09/30/07 (03:34 PM) 
beautiful...I'm glad u came with the response with this one. I digg the way u put it down also, expressin ya feelings. Im glad yall both wrote this though...a dream come tru? or jus tons of prayer for yall...yeah el diablo is good too. Madd Propz. Love ya

  drzprincess
09/29/07 (11:07 PM) 
very nice

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