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"Can you relate?"
  by THE REALIST POET


Baby everyday i think about the love that we share among each other and my

heart gets erected and my soul has an orgasm.................. baby you have

the love of ten women and the soul of an angel, you finally completed this

mixed puzzle of confusion, lies and cheats. You turned your average twenty

year old guy into a handsome twenty year old man and i appreciate and value

you and your personality! Baby im not just saying, im TELLING YOU that you

got a man who is willing to sacrifice MY LIFE to make sure you are always

around, take a bullet, give up my opportunities, i want you to have everything

before you need nothing. YOu have grown onto me that in my heart you have

your own vein streaming blood and keeping me alive, a vessel in my brain that

keeps me constantly thinking of you and the future that holds us together!

baby you are the sweet melody to my song that plays over and over in my

head! Baby for years i ran through women to search for the right woman

to grace the doorstep of my heart, i mean baby it has been nights that i have

just cried because i felt alone in this world and no woman could fit me, mentally

or sexually or even emotionally at the same time. It was always one of the

three and it hurted to know that i could open my heart up to these women and

they couldn't accept me! Baby you have came in my life and changed everything

at this point i dont know what i would do without you right now, im in love baby'

naw fuck that IM IN FATUATED with you and as far as the key to my heart goes

your molded only to open! Now can you relate????!!!!!!!!!!
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Date Submitted: Apr 26, 2009 (04:01 PM)
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  *shell bear*
05/15/09 (09:56 AM) 
this is a gr8 poem 10starzzzzzzzzz and a definate fav

  KITTY
05/10/09 (03:30 PM) 
OH HELL YES I CAN RELATE....HEART ERECTED AND SOUL HAS A ORGASM! THOSE R POWERFUL WORDS AND IT MEANS SO MUCH MORE THAN THE PHYSICAL CONTACT, THIS POEM REPRESENT A BEAUTIFUL CONNECTION FROM A MAN TO A WOMAN IN EVERY RIGHT WAY...I LOVE IT!

  G3n3sIz
05/09/09 (05:22 AM) 
thiz is gr8 to c such compassion co,in from a dude!! gr8

  icallitlife
05/06/09 (12:17 PM) 
all i can say is wow... this is such a beautiful write...

  Tricey Pooh
05/05/09 (12:53 PM) 
This was a great piece of poetry. i enjoyed every little bit. it seems as though you found that special someone and you should hold onto her because you rarely find women that are like that. It reminds me of myself and it made me smile because i'm that woemn. ne way hold onto her sweety you got a good one.

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