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"Can you stand the rain"
  by young lover


Were together now and I hope we never fall part I've trusted you from the start, you help me pick up the piece of my shattered heart, and your look ratings are off the chart. Im all yours and your all mine I'll put us on display for everyone to see tell em this how a relationship post to be I would hate for somthin to happen to us cause you mean alot to me I belive that me in you are destiny. God made you perfect the right hieght the right size in your eyes I get lost striaght hypnotized along with that beautiful smile with that bueaty mark on the left upper side. The way i fell is not just a phase because of you I learn to look at the world and diffrent ways, in I hope its always like that not jus in the happy but in the rainy days. Cause it aint always gone be perfect but you gone have to stand strong with your man in for our relationship in let nobody hurt it, even know pepole might tell a lie on ethier of us just remember that of each other we cant get enough, even if they say im no good and im full of lust just trust in let nuthin come between us, even if we argue in hang up the fone just know that your still my sweetess song, even if there a few tears or a lil pain will you maintain Can you stand the rain? jordan.A.B
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Date Submitted: Nov 24, 2008 (12:27 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/24/08 (01:17 AM)
Author: mamas baby
Poem Title: can i stand the rain

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comment icon  COMMENTS (3)
  MizzJess09
12/01/08 (07:03 PM) 
dis is so sweet. i like it. 10 stars. i kinda wished dat it would have da song can u stand da rain by new edition on here. dat' s ni song lol.

  DeeDee8908
11/30/08 (11:10 AM) 
NICE PIEEE, BEAUTYFUL N STR8 2 THE POINT 10+

  A.Renee
11/24/08 (08:58 PM) 
awww, this so adorable..i'm lovin this write...good one

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