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"Can't Just Come Out and Say It"
  by Mr. RTJ


Every time I go to work I’m caught in your beauty
And I feel it’s my civic duty
To let you know how truly
You make my heart go bananas as my mind goes fruity

But alas I know it’s not that simple
I can’t just speak on how you have such a cute dimple
I have to do something to captivate the mental
Go to such depths as to build a shrine to your temple

You have a Goddess like presence
So I have to be a God in every essence
Styled up to meet your preference
So by my company I can always grant your pleasance

After all, I can’t just go into battle without a plan of attack
Arming myself with lines of love from off the gun rack
Trenching through the wilderness of the unknown leaving bread crumbs if I have to back track
To find the code to the safe of your heart so one day I crack that

When you speak to me I just wish to entice
Provide the company that will more than suffice
Execute wording in a way that’s precise
So the usual way you think of me will make you think twice

This is why I go home and practice my game’s dribble
So when I take a shot on the court of your heart it’ll
Be a swish as I hope not to miss because my aim is a tad brittle
I pray to at least hit your rim of acknowledgement even if only a little

See I do all these things to excite you
So hopefully feelings for me are the feelings that strike you
Because truth is, I don’t think it will be enough to just come out and say
Hey, I like you

6/30/2007



{Author's Note: This is how I used to write all the time in the beginning. Fixed stanzas, fixed rhyme scheme, etc. I just wanted to see if I could still do it and keep it interesting.}
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Date Submitted: Jul 12, 2007 (09:40 AM)
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Date: 01/26/08 (08:02 PM)
Author: Ms Ness
Poem Title: Just Take A Chance, ...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (19)
  BabyBoySpik
01/30/08 (01:10 PM) 
this was a great write..I had to come nd see wut the response was to, nd I enjoyd this just az much..It was coo how the wordz flow..Nd u did do a gud job at keepin it interestin..Gud write..

  QUINNEYBABY
07/26/07 (05:37 PM) 
THIS REALLY CAUGHT MY ATTENTION...I WONDER WHO YOUR INSPIRATON IS..BUT THIS DESERVES MORE THAN 11 STARZ...THIS IS SUCH AN INTERESTING POEM

  S.O.G.
07/23/07 (02:11 PM) 
well i will say honestly u kept this poem very interesting i was having a nice time reading it.i give this interesting one 10 stars. my fellow poet fellow friend

  TASHIE
07/22/07 (06:17 PM) 
THIS ONE REALLY TOUCHED ME FOR MANY DIFFERENT REASONS BUT I'M GOING TO STOP MYSELF AS WELL. VERY GOOD READ.

  my-ty
07/20/07 (11:03 AM) 
I love this because it is true love from a real man point of view. It is sentimental and beautiful. A man's love poem - Great Job!!

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