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"Can't Ya, Don't Ya"
  by CandiLovejoy21


Nappy,
Kinky,
hair that refuses to comply
they call it can't ya don't ya,
can't ya comb it, don't ya try.

as a baby, they were sure that you had good hair
but when you turned 2, it turned too
a nappily inseparable pair...

as a child it was cool
to rock afro puffs to school,
but as a teen it just wouldn't suffice...

so you got you a perm,
but not 'til later did you learn,
that perms aint nothin nice...

now what used to be thick and healthy hair
is a chemically processed mess, thinning everywhere
split ends here,
bald spot there,
the things black women go through with their hair!

you'd give anything for that can't ya don't ya these days,
one more perm and you'll be shiny-bald like Isaac Hayes...

now in less than 2 weeks you're due for a touch up
but you're gonna tell your hair dresser that you've had enough
your gonna cut it all off and start all over again
can't ya don't ya, once the enemy, is now your best friend...

now what you gon' do with them short napps on ya head?
love and embrace it,
maybe you should grow some dreadz...lol...

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Date Submitted: Aug 10, 2007 (12:52 PM)
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  B. Rose
11/25/08 (05:08 PM) 
Lol.. Funny and true because alot of women go thru crazy stuff with they hair... me being a pround man of the natural look... the afros dont bother me not one bit yo... I rather like them alot...

  NyteTymez
03/20/08 (03:05 PM) 
LOL! THAT WAS THEE BEST! THAT WAS SOME REAL AND REAL FUNNY STUFF!!!

  lovely Lil Kie...
03/19/08 (11:15 PM) 
his is so true, and what gets me is that it was funny and sent a message.... A message about black woman and our hair. LOL . I loved it. You get 10 stars from me.

  Jody
02/01/08 (02:46 PM) 
oh snnnap... I'm happily natural after finally divorcing the perm and @ first I was like... I have baby dreads, wtf did I do??? and my perm addication was calling but I gave it some time and I love my natural hair! This took me back to all those feelings I had when I first decided to go natural. Love the background, it's beautiful and I love the line that says when we were two thought it was "good hair" lol, you had me rolling with that. I love this piece and you know it's not only a ten but ...
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  11th Wonduh
12/01/07 (01:22 AM) 
enjoyable piece, once again, even though there's humor, there's an underlying message that resonates on this write. again, nice piece

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