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"Cardiac Infection"
  by Maxine


Emotions...
are like bacteria...
growing unseen and
multiplying fast...
Often causing intense delirium,
with no projection of how long
symptoms will last.

Emotions engulf the mind of its vic',
creating distortions--
mirages of the cardiac muscle's pick....
And it spirals out of control,
to others in proximity,
until everyone ends up terminally sick...

It often goes
undiagnosed,
or in some cases merely untreated...
until the pathogen spreads
throughout the heart chambers,
leaving the soul emotionally defeated.
Out of desperation to stop the pain,
the victim often seeks out false hope...
searching for inadequate remedies
that act as mere bandaids,
disguised as the viral antedote.

But alas to no avail,
the cardiac tissue continues to wither,
first starts out with a few faint tears
but the gash rips open,
bigger and bigger...
Until the patient's heart loses consciousness,
and the eyes become vacant...
and the scars that disfigure now visible
as their faith in love has been taken...
Vulnerability put on park,
as the soul grows dark
and the patient codes blue
unable to battle the infection corsing thru....

Perhaps another perspective will combat my views,
which is cool,
but for many my observations ring true...
And I think I should know
better than most,
as I ink this, hooked up to machines
dying in the ICU.
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Date Submitted: Apr 07, 2009 (10:49 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 04/08/09 (09:42 AM)
Author: OGSoldier4God
Poem Title: My Heart Is Infected

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  Living Legend ...
04/19/09 (11:04 PM) 
sorry it took so long to responf to one of yuor poems and return the love. i been mobile and it wont let me comment on poems from their. but anyway this is a very good write. very discriptive and vivid nice write keep doing your thing

  AR-15
04/16/09 (09:27 AM) 
Very deep indeed,... From start to finish this blew me away.. An incredible sense of imagery, and metaphor.... Really enjoyed reading this.. nice work

  Mz Marie
04/15/09 (11:50 PM) 
well put together piece..and i agree with Raxxie.. Great job girl!!Keep it going..

  Raxxie
04/15/09 (12:39 PM) 
your imagination is fantastic!! wow.. i have a thing for metaphor and it was executed brilliantly! i kinda hope that you don't generally view emotions that way. they have to potential for real beauty under the right circumstances.. they are infectious but often times in a positive way.. anyway, like i said this was fantastic!

  Ulises
04/15/09 (01:34 AM) 
This piece was Great,I like the concept and how everything was put together,The writing was really good,too many potent lines to rephrase,most definitely a ten,I really enjoyed reading this,

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