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"Carpal Tunnel Syndrome"
  by 22dcentpoet


It is time I write a new poem, a "Let the Choir Say Amen" poem
A poem that will change water to wine
A poem that will change a sinners mind

It is time I write a sexy poem, a "Mind Blowing Decision" poem
A poem that reeks of wet dreams, and a soaked sheet
A poem that roars, like when thunder and lightning meet

It is time I write a solemn poem, an "Ashes to Ashes" poem
A poem that hides the tears of the heartbroken
A poem that gives words to the unspoken

It is time I write a "Ain't No Sunshine When You Gone" poem
A poem that has me looking for love in all the wrong places
A poem that has me searching for you and seeing all the wrong faces

But I can't write that poem cause my hand is cramping from all the other poems
I may just have carpal tunnel syndrome
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Date Submitted: Jun 19, 2009 (06:02 PM)
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  BrEeZyWrOtE
07/13/09 (06:49 PM) 
i love this. very creative. i love the way you set this up. very well written.

  bricksta
07/13/09 (02:52 PM) 
very interesting, it really get deep into what poets are all about, the countless topics we right about. i enjoyed a lot

  icnicn2004
06/19/09 (06:18 PM) 
Wow....interesting piece. Nice!

  Remy82
06/19/09 (06:15 PM) 
i like this. the format was nice and I loved the ending. great write! 10 starz

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