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"Casted Away"
  by Meli-ku


As i get casted away from your love
the crashing waves rule my heart
as storms brew inside my head.

A vocano of words erupts from my mouth
as i talk to you.
As a flood of tears stream down my face
while i tell you "i cant take anymore.

You looked at me
the pain begin arising in you,
burning you,
as you realise what you have done.

"Sorry" is all you can say
while your words start to choke the life out of you
as you try to embrace me with your arms.

Sorry wont cut it this time" i say
turning my back to you
as i walk way from you for the last time.
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Date Submitted: May 11, 2008 (09:53 PM)
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  Speranza
05/17/08 (08:00 PM) 
Strong words, good emotion. People can relate to this.

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