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"Casualty of War"
  by Gina1982


another young brave man
sent far across the sea
prepared to trade his life
for America's right to be free
grant formless nations
a chance
to taste our democracy

"the land of the free"

- really?

was this meant

literally
or
figuratively

tears of blood
bleed down lady liberty's face
watching over our nation
and crying out in disgrace
understanding that peace
is something
her children will never
embrace

hatred and greed
has fueled the hearts of the human race
a piece of the American pie
we all want a taste

resources
that once flourished
consumed, now gone
the world is becoming
malnourished
and that leaves us taking
raping
gaping
holes in the asses of others
killing the ones
we should consider
our brothers
leaving for dead
in hopes of bettering ourselves
stealing out of greed
to expand our wealth
no longer concerned
with the nations stability
and mental health

we teach society
that it is wrong to kill
then ship our troops across waters
to devour third worlds
like it is their last meal
the sound of
bullets
and
bombs
they become so real
someone
please tell me
what it is
we are fighting for
please explain
the meaning of
such a hideous war

will we ever heal
this land of such waste
that could be so powerful
if the right morals
were honestly embraced
or will the meaning of
"the land of free"
forever be defaced
as we ship another
young brave man out
and watch his life be erased



Casualties in Iraq --
American Deaths:
Since war began 3.19.03 - Total: 4,315 - In Combat: 3,458
Since "Mission Accomplished" 01.01.03 - Total: 4,176 - In Combat: 3,350
Since Capture of Saddam 12.13.03 - Total: 3,854 - In Combat: 3,152
Since Handover 06.29.04 - Total: 3,456 - In Combat: 2,825
Since Obama Inauguration 01.20.09 - Total: 87 - In Combat: 24
Americans Wounded:
Total: 31,351 - In Combat: Estimated over 100,000
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Date Submitted: Jun 17, 2009 (04:37 PM)
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09/21/09 (06:48 PM) 
You are a true poet.....Tip my hat...If I could rate this I wouldnt cuz there isnt enouhg stars....srcibe on

  warriorprinces...
06/19/09 (01:44 PM) 
...we war with ourselves ....and than we war with the world....nothing in war is fair ....and all is hard to justify ...there is no peace at the end of a war .....because war always leaves a forwarding address....therefore it is inevitable that whilst some ar living life to the full nithe world ...others are dying in another part of the world....loved this write in which you expressed the devastation caused by war so well.....and you have raised alot of questions ....in every readers mind...you...
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  A.C.H.
06/19/09 (10:44 AM) 
I'm absolutely speechless! This was a thought-provoking piece! Your write just reminds us how hypocritical our country is in all its imperfections. I must commend you on your research of this subject trying to tally up the numbers, I know it took time. Very impressive! Much luv on this write! - "the inspired one"

  dontnohow
06/18/09 (07:56 PM) 
good to know ppl think about other things .. yeah know? and not so much about ..idk.. the frivolous in the word..Im up on the site this morning reading bout playin games,lol.. man! just.. very nice gina

  MR. BYRD
06/18/09 (03:25 PM) 
This indeed was one of the deepest writes I've encountered.....and you brought a lot of truth to why troops are still overseas fighting for a war that's so unjust....you really opened my eyes up and I truly appreciate you writing this.....as American Soldier, everyone is going to have their views, mixed feelings on this war and in the forsseable future....great piece...continue to push that pen Gina...

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