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"checking on"
  by after vision


you look at me

when you should look for me

you talk at me

when you should talk to me

checking on me
when trust is not in your heart
checking on me
hoping that my version of you don't start

you keep an eye on me

second guessing my every word

you listen to my conversations

to see if your story i have heard

all i ever asked for was you
your heart and your time
the same thing that you promised
when you took mine


after vision
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Date Submitted: Sep 26, 2008 (08:45 AM)
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  WIZ
10/03/08 (08:39 AM) 
DAMN, I HATE IT, WHEN SHIT LIKE THAT HAPPENS.

  blacknsexyjuic...
10/01/08 (08:47 PM) 
Ireally feel you on this it is so powerful i can relate when you give your all to someone and in return they dont trust you its hurtful but this is an awesome write you have such talent so keep on writing

  poetrys peace
10/01/08 (06:22 AM) 
theres nothing worse than mistrust!!!!your sorrow is screaming from this piece.... deep and heart felt......excellent write poet!

  mz_April
09/29/08 (04:58 PM) 
i hate when people dont trust me when i am doing right and have to check up on me keep ya pen hand strong 10*

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