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"Chocolatecoffeshoplaxation Pt2"
  by BlessedOne
  - This Poem is a response to the poem (Season Finale) Chocolatecoffeshoplaxation by Esoteric


[I can’t say it as eloquent as you can. Are you sure you want me to finish this E? Oh well, too late. Already been boomed!]



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Have you ever held something so beautiful
In your arms and wanted to hug it, but
You knew that if you did, that you would crush it

Have you ever looked up at a star at night
And it looked so close that you could touch it

But

When you tried, you realized that it was so
Far away that you would never be able to hold it
In the palms of your hand

(sigh)

Have you ever tasted chocolate so sweet
That it made tears come to your eyes and
Before you could really enjoy it to the fullest
It was all gone; not a drop, or even a residue remained

The very thought

Of that sweet chocolate is enough to drive you insane

Have you ever been in love with love itself
Then find out that even love didn’t love you back
That even he was playing a game

Have you ever been so angry with love that you wanted
To give him a black eye and you didn’t even know why

(f*@%$#@!)

Have you ever read something that tasted so sweet to
Your ears that you wanted to tear the pages out of the book
And chew on the sheet until you had exacted all the emotions from the words,

But,

The bitter reality that you couldn’t..........brought tears to your eyes

Well,

I have experienced all of this

Life has been such a bitch to me, but I refuse to give up
I refuse to throw in the towel because I know that there is much more living
that I want to do…there is so many more chocolate butterflies that I want to kiss

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Date Submitted: Feb 04, 2009 (08:57 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/17/09 (03:56 AM)
Author: BlessedOne
Poem Title: ChocolateCoffeShopla...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (18)
  angeleyes1
07/21/09 (12:44 AM) 
very beautiful write diva so much class wow keep them coming much love

  Kunspikuous
07/21/09 (12:04 AM) 
THIS IS A FAV FOR SHO'..... I LOVED IT....10 I WISH I COULD GIVE MORE. AMAZING!!!!! I LOVED THE WORD FLOW AND THE VISION U GAVE US!!!!

  jamiah
07/09/09 (09:44 PM) 
This is a classic. I had to come back and read it again.

  Ryter
07/09/09 (10:46 AM) 
I like how that sounds chocalate butterflies. This, despite the content felt so light and fluffy. I don't know why, either way great write and keep it up***************

  Jody
06/17/09 (05:29 PM) 
beautiful! love this! and the bg : )

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