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"choking on it"
  by Blakfiya


There’s a quiet speech in my throat
words wanting to bubble
trapped in the swallow
contents seeking up

each sound convincing
twisting emotions
flipping stances
retreats...
then advancing

but wait

what goes in
must come out
and there’s so much more
that a person’s about

but the last action
can revisit
and if its
here to stay
then maybe these words
….I must say

but for now,
I clasp my hands
and choke on the verbs
that thoughts compelled
be interred


---
Just Wait - Blues Traveler

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Date Submitted: Aug 16, 2009 (01:12 PM)
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  Syndel
08/17/09 (07:54 PM) 
I am def feeling this write been there so much needed to be said and yet the voice slipped away

  after vision
08/17/09 (11:44 AM) 
i fell in love with that part

  after vision
08/17/09 (11:43 AM) 
what goes in must come out and there’s so much more that a person’s about

  THE GOD WAR-CL...
08/16/09 (09:48 PM) 
Definitely fely queen............

  MAVRICK
08/16/09 (01:24 PM) 
I have that, wait and see approach of not wanting to speak too soon, or expose your hand, because you're still scanning the perimeter, making sure that sweet jolly rancher aint really a fully-loaded stick of emotional dynamite...i like how you dropped this...

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