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"Chronicles Of THe SOul: Broken Part II"
  by A.J. Rhymez


Only for one night I shed so many tears
But it seems like I've been cryin for many years
I prayed for strength to make my way
But it gets hard to face my days
People tried thier best to help me with my troubles
But how can they help when they never seen the struggle
So here I am again all stressed out
BROKEN- and my heart is filled with doubt
All I have is myself. I'm all alone
I wonder if there's an ending to this song
I cry out to myself "What the Use"
Is there anymore a brotha can go through
i bend my knees. Place my head in my hands
Condemnation came to kill my inner man
Now I'm left with a BROKEN heart and depression
With no answers but with many questions..

BROKEN
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Date Submitted: Feb 27, 2008 (05:39 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 04/13/08 (12:34 AM)
Author: Mz.Jazz
Poem Title: Let Us Walk As One

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comment icon  COMMENTS (9)
  Takeitlikeman1...
09/15/08 (02:32 PM) 
I feel you.love this 9 starz

  CHEESEY BREAD
09/14/08 (11:05 AM) 
GOOD STUFF KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK....10

  ShezsFrsh_Y@D!...
09/12/08 (07:50 AM) 
damn i gotta come back and see u stressed and depressed through this?? lol i loved ur structure of this and the fact it left me thinking at the end...(those r always a winner for me). i dont ever have to tell how good ur writes r cus u know coming from me im always gon love it. dont ever stop the pen from flowing!

  heartfelt embr...
09/11/08 (01:48 AM) 
damn that hit me hard. i hope everything lookz up soon. man one daii you gonna wake up have some coffeee see the sun shining an the worlds gon look like a different place. trust i been there when i thought there was no hope. the struggle never endz but it getz easier as long as you got the willpower you justy gotta get up and fight the dark each daii til the sun comez to stay for a while. n maybe you'll have to do that more than once but itz worth it for the sun. you gotta reach the light in th...
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  shay12_wifey
09/10/08 (07:07 PM) 
I LOVED IT IT IS SO TRUE I MEAN HOW CAN U HELP SOME1 WHEN U NEVER BEEN TROUGH WAT THEY HAVE BEEN THROUGH

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