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"Clear-colored"
  by koolaiid


these clear-colored like things keep rushing down from my eyes
and lately i've been seeing them run down my face a lot
is it healthy to cry as much as i do
i cry so much you could say i cry a river

can you tell me why these clear-colored like things won't go away
why they keep coming back every night
i'm so tired of seeing these things roll outta my eyes
no one even comes to wipe them except a little piece of tissue and sometimes the back of my sensitive right hand

sometimes they fall into my mouth
they taste so bland
these clear-colored like things come out in groups
never are they alone

they're not visitors because they seem to stay
stay in my eyes, ready to come out when it's the right time for them to
i don't want to see these clear-colored like things,
go away tears! go away!
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Date Submitted: Aug 18, 2008 (12:04 AM)
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  big_nasty114
12/21/08 (04:36 PM) 
deep in emotion thanks for the love. 10stars

  jerl
11/08/08 (11:37 PM) 
Your commentors are right. It is a way to release the pain, to cleanse yourself but, that is not the way to live forever more. There is too much life left for you to spend all your time crying. So, cry if you must and stop when you must. Each day will be a little brighter until you finally see the sunshine. GOD bless!

  Jstar28
11/08/08 (10:17 PM) 
I like the poem it was good.

  Mrs.Conceited
10/23/08 (09:46 PM) 
I loved it. 10 starz all the way. You want them to go away and when your soul is cleansed they will. Tears can cure your illness, just as well as any pill. IDK what the story behind the tears is, but I hope those clear-colored things have disappeared. one luv.

  Shane Polo
09/16/08 (10:04 PM) 
i really like this one. i can feel the emotion and frustration in it. 10

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