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"Close Ur Eye's"
  by 2DAMNREAL..A.K.A Whyte Lion..Soul Of Zion
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Lifted Restricted.... by 2DAMNREAL..A.K.A Whyte Li...


Close Your Eyes - Sisqo

Funny How her Smile'S So Sinster
Yet Sensual...
How MY Instumental
Call's
Your Name..

whispering Echo's of Stomach's
TONE
Melodic-ly

Hit'n Me
Deep

Cavern's Causing Cleft's 2 Get
Left..

Sticky
Tasting Delicous
Sinster
Smiles
Halo's
Arch'd like
Back's While
I thrash
and She Act's

Slow
Steep
Sound's
Of Our
Rhythm's Beat...Her
JuiceBoxx
Overflowing
yet Not off My Manhood
Mearly

the Imagination of
Such potentcy
Being Released..Beyond
Motivational Money
Make Her Cum
Motto's

I Floss What Her D.N.A.'s
Got
gargle
and swallow

her Charm's
Lucky that

She's So Sweet...

Becoming Enamoured I become
2
Entransed..Bite her

Left Thigh

Til She Cry

Out
"What U Try'n Do 2 Me

Tongue Twirl's Tatt'n
Tremour's of Inner's Being
Stimualted by Flagrant Lust..Need 2
fill the Greed 2
Feel Me
Feelin' U..
Watch U Move..
Do What We Do

Time Become's Elastic

CLOAK'S
Inacted 4
Shy Scene's

but We
Both Being's
of SIMPLE MEAN'S

"FUCK IF THEY WATCHIN"
FUCK IF THEY KNOW...SHAWTY I'M TRYIN TA'
GO
SLOW MO'
IN YO'
GLOW UNTIL MY PROSE
BECOME ENTANGLED Like Ur Froze
Stature I'm Tryin 2
Capture Our
Kodak

Moment In Shutter's
Suspending
Splendor of
Rendered
Words
Realized...

I Close my Eye's

Lye..
In her Lillies

Birth Life's Light...

Looking into Those Brown EYE'S...
Even In the Event Of
Our
Demise Or My SIGHT
becoming Blind

My Time..Ment...Everything
I gave...
Enslaved 2
the Haze
Your Essence
Made..
Embriodic Interval's
of
Salacious Visual's with
Digitals of Her
Plentiful Pleasureable...

Peaking My Vunerbility...
"MY HOW I WISH I
LITERALLY
WAS THA T BODYPAINT!"


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Date Submitted: Jun 21, 2009 (03:24 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/22/09 (07:14 PM)
Author: 2DAMNREAL..A.K.A Why...
Poem Title: Could She Be My Ange...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (17)
  AKYBSANE1
11/04/09 (01:44 AM) 
wow ure composition is so perfect its sensual witout being nasty ...i lik 10*s

  317
10/19/09 (04:35 PM) 
what a flow... you just... it\'s like words just came out of a hat randomly rhyming to make a picture or a short story that one can see with his heart and not his mind... that\'s sick

  E LS B
09/17/09 (02:05 AM) 
you made my jaw drop lol very nice!!

  Shye201
09/17/09 (01:51 AM) 
this is really hott...loved it.

  kingpen.bi
09/14/09 (06:20 AM) 
This joint is very well written in a metaphorical abstract kind of way. An average reader may get to your last period and scratch their heads. I can dig it though.

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