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"Cobwebs of Treachery"
  by cado astrum


My heart sings a soulless melody,
My eyes see only cobwebs of treachery,
I carry on a lifeless pace,
And exquisite pain I never taste,
I drink a poison to make me numb,
It is the poison of a hypnotic tongue,
I sleep a sleep devoid of dreams,
And never speak in whispers or screams,
I have been remade to start anew,
But at the cost of all I once knew,
My heart sings a soulless melody,
My eyes see only cobwebs of treachery.
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Date Submitted: Oct 01, 2007 (08:03 PM)
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  Renee`
10/22/07 (04:57 PM) 
This is a powerful piece. It's short, sweet, and effective. (I almost wish I wrote it.) You have a gift. Keep writin' that fire!

  Bud Edward
10/02/07 (08:06 PM) 
extremely well-written. As scriptixz states the imagery truly is flawless. "I have been remade to start anew, But at the cost of all I once knew" I can really relate to this idea. The following line also touches my heart.

  Scriptixz
10/02/07 (06:12 AM) 
so short and yet bitterly sweet!!! "I drink a poison to make me numb, It is the poison of a hypnotic tongue" ahhhhh yes, the deception and betrayal...the imagery in this was flawless!!! :-)

  cado astrum
10/01/07 (09:33 PM) 
Written in 2004.

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