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"Comfort in a Comb"
  by blessed92297


I tried to sound strong when she called to check on me that night
I didn’t want to ruin her good mood
She had just left her Saturday night date
She said that everything had gone great

I guess I didn’t do such a good job disguising my hurt
Don’t say another word Jenni
I’m just leaving the city
I’ll be there in thirty minutes

I was waiting at the door when she arrived
Like a pitiful sick child

I tried explaining my hurt
She shushed me quiet
As she wiped the tear away
Tell it to God in your own special way

She pulled me to the sofa
Wrapped me in her loving arms
Rubbing on my back
She began humming a song

My tears began to flow freely
They were like big rain drops
Running down my face
Staining her beautiful dress of lace

Next she did the strangest thing
She pulled out her big black comb
She began running it thru my hair
As though she was trying to comb away all my despair

I felt her sectioning my hair off into small parts
The lines were running vertical and
horizontal like that of a chart...
She was braiding my hair

I continued to pray, as she continued to hum
I was being comforted by this sisterly bond
After every braid was complete
She moved me from her caring arms to the sofa seat

A kiss on my forehead I received
She packed her bag as she started to leave
She turned and said I love you as she started for the door
But remember Jenni God loves you more

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Date Submitted: Jun 10, 2008 (10:37 AM)
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  Bud Edward
02/05/09 (11:03 AM) 
Definitely feeling that. It comes to life in my mind and I can see it like it is real. Brilliant writing.

  Yas
02/03/09 (09:58 PM) 
this has such soothing calming effects the deeper you read into it the more relaxed you feel as the words just sort of take over...much enjoyed :)

  JennyBoBenny
02/03/09 (06:21 AM) 
that was just beautiful real BEAUTIFUL almost made me cry for min

  l0nnieugene
01/28/09 (11:35 PM) 
...like RedLoveSong, i thought i had commented on this poem b4. i remember writing a piece titled "Hair Brush" &some1 referring me 2Your tour de force on matters of the hair or more 2the point~~Sisterhood sharing. Each braid was a tightening bond made Your SisterShip stronger far beyond ordinary Friendship. That makes U2 the Blessed2.

  Phynesss
01/24/09 (04:45 PM) 
This is just beautiful. This piece makes me think of hot chocolate nights and soft hiccups after weeping deeply. It is soothing.

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