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"Comin From Ohio"
  by Rayve


This is from a convo I had with a person who made it seem like just cuz Dayton isn't huge, it ain't the hood

I may not be from New York, Cali
And I damn sure ain't from the dirty
But when the shots get to firin'
I know its about 11:30
Niggas poppin pistols, profit is thier priority
Comin home with bruises courtesy of the red or blue sorority
Outside hours on end just for the fiends
Then the police come around like they got some damn authority
Poppin up with the quickness just so they can check in
But take forever and a day whenever you REALLY fuckin need em'
But the hood we feed them,
Line they pockets they can afford those extra off duty clothes
But that's the way the grimy goes....... i suppose
A boquet where he fell and never arose
Teddy Grams on damn near every corner for a fallen soldier
A woman's scream followed by "I guess they just told her"
50 people got the momma but can't no one console her
Her baby girl is gone cuz her baby daddy put out orders to commode her
Now her face is in the the unsolved file rotting in a manilla folder
She was successful... in to weeks about to graduate
Shit that just takes her graduating class down to 28
Of those 28, 7 are pregnant or well on the way
Only expectin 15 to see a college campus one day
They are now conisdered uppity and degenerate
And for those who don't make it, they can take the system that is negligent
Becase they decided to become a product of their enviorment
And pay section 8 thier $15 rent
Instead of trying to circumvent
We small but the hoods the hood so location shouldn't make a difference..... should it?
Good niggas get hit witht he same bullet
Over the same bad shit
Smart nigga gettin dropped over some dumb bitch
Now lyin in some fuckin ditch
Just cuz this dude's trigger finger itched
So as far as I'm concerned, Dayton is just as shitty
As any other fuckin city
A placed looked at with pity
Where the ones who survive were the smart and the gritty
If you don't believe me.... come live in this bitch with me

RIP- Boo, Kool-aid, Diontae D, Benny, Richard, Kori, Ryan, Ju and ayone else I missed

Dayton, Ohio
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Date Submitted: Jun 30, 2008 (07:34 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 07/01/08 (11:03 AM)
Author: freespirit
Poem Title: chi town my town

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  11th Wonduh
08/28/08 (04:15 PM) 
having lived in the miami valley area (fairborn to be exact) and working & partying in dayton w/ fam still in dayton, i can honestly say that especially from third down to gettysburg, it's hell, nonetheless that's where i enjoyed some of my most memorable experiences and since it reminds me of my hometown, i'll always have love for the gem city

  DaveOfClevelan...
08/07/08 (04:47 PM) 
wow. this was a deep one. and here i am thinking that shit only pops off like that in cleveland. when i was in the air force i use to always stop in dayton to see my favorite ex at wright-patt. she's in cleveland now. but we are both tied up in our own situations.

  katie-kate
07/31/08 (09:33 AM) 
Whoa ma...you did ya thing on this one 4real. The part that really go me is when you said that "Good niggas get hit with the same bullet" That is soooo true no matter what city you in theres always something going on just like any of these other citys that people call really ruff. Gotta add this to ma fav

  touchdapearl2
07/26/08 (04:57 AM) 
whew...everybody wanna rep there hood and holla who's harder but im with you them bullets get to popping on no limit on whe's hood harder or shoot the best man shit happens everywhere hell even in suburban areas now-a-days hell,lol

  Touch
07/25/08 (08:29 PM) 
ok ok ok i see you:) you are too real i cant wait to read more:) OHIO!!!

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