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"comment 2 a mind orgasmic poem"
  by Relli
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I Resist-Part 1 by Hank


awwwweee
i loved it to say the the least....
i caught your drifts....
as deep
as the heart lies but still it just sits
oragami note
code for a perplexed mind to explain looooooooovvvvvve
creasing the paper of your thoughts
in hope of a smile or a huuuuuuuuggggggg
i guess im sayin u sparked my hand to to get naked
so our pens could faaaaaaauuuukkkkk
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Date Submitted: Sep 06, 2009 (12:13 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/07/09 (12:08 AM)
Author: K.A.S. THE LYRICAL G...
Poem Title: SPARKED

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comment icon  COMMENTS (15)
  Jazzy Storm
10/22/09 (02:56 PM) 
you already know i\'m a fan ma. this right here is hot. i agree with hzl you went soft and sensual in the beginnning and straight hardcore at the end. loved it. keep spilling ink on \'em poet.

  Tuck
10/19/09 (01:29 PM) 
lol I could swear u was takin a dump on this one lol na im playin but this was ready

  Siimply Poetic
10/06/09 (04:36 PM) 
great write, short but it's straight to the point. I'm feeling ur poetic flow.

  hzl-iz-keyz
10/06/09 (11:13 AM) 
Great responce! It is so sweet in seductive and then you just slap it with some hardcore in the end. I liked that! Keep your pen flowin. 1 Luv...Keyz

  คว...
09/11/09 (09:43 AM) 
very cute, jus a smidgen of sexually seductiveness....a great response

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