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"Comparison Slaughter"
  by Y.D.


Instrumental - Mims - This Is Why Im Hot - Mims

Check this out..
ahaha now listen..

I've been hearin alotta talk from these niggas,
but still don't see no action,
flows so hot and lyrics so static that I'm causin contraction,
I give face lifts but I ain't no jackson,
always got 24k around my body, I'm startin to feel like a soldier,
looks like I just bought an entire gallery,
I attract bitches like I'm magnetic, but burn emcees like steel wool
but still doesn't mean they gotta be mad at me,
ahaha I make more dollas than bill gates salaries,
Cuz I'm so hot that the stars and suns wants to battle me,
I'm so fly that you can see me right next to jesus,
Only if the niggas that doubted me could see this,
I see them and there goonz walking down in the streets,
like they drowning in sugar,
and always posing like they on television shows,
stick barrels up there nostrils and let the bugars come outta they're nose,

but now hip hop ain't that,
if you a rat, go ahead and take the cheese,
cuz later I'll just catch you in the trap,
now listen I wasn't borned I was sketched and invented,
a lab test going wrong nigga I'm the invention,
a miracle, better than anything you could ever mention,
I'ma samurai to these fakes, they'd be fencin,
I was made as a lethal weapon to eat tracks like quick sand,
I've always been in a constant grind never stoppin like hawk,
and as long as I'm clenching on this mic tight,
I'll ALWAYS be a comparison slaughterer.

THE END.
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Date Submitted: Jul 09, 2009 (10:18 PM)
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  KiNg-Go0B3r
07/12/09 (12:58 PM) 
hmmm ok ok u killed the beat bruh but i honestly think u coulda ripped it better. not sayin that ya flow wasnt hot. it was def. but like i said in my last comment there is always room for improvement jus keep pushin that pen and jus like fuckin surprise my ass with ya next ink mayn

  TUANE
07/11/09 (02:57 PM) 
I likethis flow here bruh. And tha flow is all there. Keep tha pen moving 10strz

  Ulises
07/09/09 (10:29 PM) 
This was a hot drop,your flow was ill,good shit

  Chainz.
07/09/09 (10:26 PM) 
i like this line right here - > now listen I wasn't borned I was sketched and invented, a lab test going wrong nigga I'm the invention, " great word play bruh, i like reading these kind of writes 10 stars

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