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"Con/Dum/Breakers (just a few poetic quickies...)"
  by Autumn joi


I.
your dick
does not rule my world


II.
his heart closed
when her legs opened


III.
my pussy is not big enough
for your insecurities


IV.
his skeletons fell
from between her legs


V.
he left
when she came


VI.
she blew her love into his dick
hoping it would reach his heart


VII.
she swallowed her pride
with his cum


VIII.
her hopes
dripped down her thighs


IX.
only his dick says
I love you


X.
he fucked
her soul
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Date Submitted: Jun 12, 2009 (03:45 PM)
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  Shane Kora
08/07/09 (02:51 PM) 
III AND VI FUCKED MY HEAD UP!!! I LOVE THIS MORE THAN WORDS!!!!

  Planted Daisie...
07/07/09 (10:36 PM) 
damn girl you are preaching away....keep 'em coming.....nice scribe...10* and a fave

  stlpimpin27
06/23/09 (10:28 PM) 
wow... ummm don't know what to say, but this is pretty much what goes on in the world

  Chareese
06/23/09 (10:25 PM) 
ewww this was so deep with such a small amount of words. dang you have me. wow. i dont even know how to feel now... "his heart closed when her legs opened" dang.

  Dream Weaver
06/23/09 (07:50 PM) 
This is one helluva piece! Very creative word of art that had me hooked line for line. Excellent write, my dear.

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