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"Confection Perfection {Chocolate Luvrs}"
  by Jamillah


We sweet.

Delicacies that delicately
grace the spread of our sheet
where we've convened to eat
soft..and round, brown mounds..on this satiny
bed of down
that fluffs
when we huff and we puff
and we blow.

Without instruction
or
inhibition,
we measure up
to confection perfection.

We are chocolate chips in our own secreted, congealed stickiness;
in the thicky thicknesses
of sweet sugar brown batter..cups full.
..smackin n dabbin n stabbin in middles..
spoonin, our mouths full
till mornin.
We bake
in the heat of this love that we make;
..We are..
golden, gooey, chocolately brown and cinnamon
..heart-shaped chocolate chips..
..chocolate covered pretzel bits..
- twisted up -
2
moresouls
making love
till we crumble,
crumpled and rumpled,
soggy..tender
like
we've been
soakin
in
milk.

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Date Submitted: Feb 02, 2008 (12:21 AM)
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  KwameAsar
05/25/08 (11:27 PM) 
extremely witty, love the concept on this poem. Very creative and sensual. I really like this poem...resepct.

  Davy
05/06/08 (11:11 AM) 
"we measure up to confection perfection" Real sensual and sweet. I'm damn near hungry! No pun intended :)

  nywizdom
02/14/08 (10:26 AM) 
damn mama...where u been hiding at? can a brotha get a soulcast...i would luv to hear this spoken! excellent

  piss a mofo of...
02/04/08 (10:03 PM) 
Now you know i'm a chocolate lover and so i guess this was directed towards me, cuz that is JUST the way i likes mine!!!*smiles*..."..chocolate covered pretzel bits..-twisted up-2 moresouls making love.."..mmmm now that sounds delicious! a confectionary masterpiece Ma..

  Miss Truthful
02/04/08 (12:09 PM) 
this is very sexual... i like the flow...

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