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"Confidence in her Insecurities"
  by LOVELY BLUE


Compliments given on a regular
People approachin sayin that they sweatin her
still on the inside..she dont kno no better
Confidence ain't a characteristic that befriended her

she walks around guys joc-in her
but she pays no mind to what they see in her
in the mirror she see no one appeasin her
&& at nite she lay lonely cuz she think they teasing her

She gotta nice shape..girls be wantin her
but she try to down play attention thrown at her
she really dont see what people see in her
&& she dont wanna seem stuck up but this confusin her

She try to play it off
the way she feel inside
but she keep feelin lost
&& just wanna die
it's the easy way out
&& she cant justify
just how things got this complex
someone tell er why..

hopefully the right person comes along
helps her paint a picture
tell her that she wrong
she's a beatifully, smart,
independent girl
&& maybe one day she'll let someone in her world

~LovelyBlue~
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Date Submitted: Oct 09, 2009 (02:58 PM)
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  jslim
12/23/09 (01:16 AM) 
another great one.. I wrote a poem kinda like this called diet pills... great write

  DRIZZY
12/23/09 (12:33 AM) 
this right here was a very amazing write

  Miss~Shank
12/23/09 (12:26 AM) 
i like this ... i like the concept of it... there are so many females that feel this way and no matter what they countinue to feel like this.... nice write

  Debbie
12/23/09 (12:25 AM) 
keep it UP GIRL AND DON'T LET KNOCKERS KNOW U DOWN...UGOT IT!!!!

  unbound
12/21/09 (04:27 AM) 
it's your turn to receive the snaps and you earned every single one! This write is so fluid, your flow is tight like new weave. The story was interesting, you said so much in the few prose you used. Definitely a good write. *snap snap* lol

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