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"Confused Truth Pt I"
  by Truessence4u


Passing through the impact meager
but the hardache greater
feeling foolish
seeming stupid
it all releases I fear a lot of things
If I don't have one thing
forever forever forever
paralyzed trapped
into a dark time
It took one time
and I was in it for a lifetime
forever forever forever
in your world my spirit
has demised now I know its time
it's strange for me to admit my
passion it's a hard breaking
realization to disappoint my thoughts
with a interrrupted truth
that i'm heart broken over you
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Date Submitted: Jul 25, 2009 (02:39 PM)
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  (Floetic~One) ...
07/30/09 (10:06 PM) 
this one iz so heartfelt... very well written. keep that pen hot! 10 starz

  theycallmelife
07/26/09 (12:54 AM) 
Very different...style and pace and i that stands out...would enjoy hearing it read aloud

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