short.. but so much meanings.. 10 stars

wow, talk about painting a visual, nicely done.

My smile was choking.. Hmm.. that line shook me a little bit.. I loved this.. Had to read a couple times.. Deep ish. So it got me thinking like.. When you're laughing.. no one thinks anything of it and they're prob laughing with you.. but your smile is choking.. and no one notices.. no saves you.. Smh.. What's left if your smile dies? Hmm... [ignore me its post two oclock and im sleepy.]

damn real deep bay...i love the strong words....ten

Your words remind me that I laugh at the most inopportune times. We laugh to keep from crying. I laugh when I am scared or confused. Therefore I grasp this smiling when a spirit is broken.