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"Couldn't See"
  by smilez89


YOU couldn't see through the shit,
That nigga aint want you he wanted to hit,
You couldn't see through his lies,
This nigga would laugh everytime you cried.
You couldn't see he didn't give a damn,
He was never there and always ran.
You couldn't see he aint want what you had,
Stretch marks from having a child and he's the dad.
You couldn't see who he was fucking with,
everyday after work going to her crib.
You couldn't see who was stealing your man.
You couldn't see or understand.....
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Date Submitted: Aug 02, 2009 (10:46 PM)
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  B Easy
08/06/09 (01:42 PM) 
This is deep. I can see you been thru alot and have alot of things in your heart. Either that our you have a very good imagination. Either way this is a good write. I think i might have to do a poem reponse to one of your writting. Good write. Get at me

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