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"Crashed and Burned"
  by mmd2888
  - This Poem is a response to the poem The Ride of My Life by MZ QUEEN


Just because I'm coming from a different perspective
Trust and believe I can still feel you
I am still shaking my head
at all the bullshyt she put me through
It's crazy because she kept things
so perfectly honest
I downplayed it, ignored it
Tried my best to be modest
She snuck off to me when her girl wasn't around
I thought that made me important
I was just trying to be down
I thought things would be different
I thought things would eventually change
But the more things changed
I realized the more they stayed the same
I got the hint, yea baby its cool
But that night I decided
No longer would I be a fool
Now that its over
I'm accepting the situation
as a lesson learned
The ride of my life was short lived
Our love crashed and burned
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Date Submitted: Apr 24, 2009 (12:59 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  Ciara
09/13/09 (01:03 AM) 
good 1... I know how this goes...

  Ladyoflyrics
05/27/09 (12:46 AM) 
um huh just like life... never preparing you for the hurt .very well written piece and perfect title to the way it feels afterward. good pen

  nikkiboo212
04/26/09 (09:43 PM) 
lUvin ITT !! GOOd 1..10 STRZ FRM ME XOXO NiKKI

  MZ QUEEN
04/24/09 (01:02 AM) 
BOY U DID YA THING ON THIS JOINT AND I FEEL THAT 100% 10 STARZ!!!!!!!!!!!!

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