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"crazied artist.. paints mural"
  by crazied soul


she speaks.. bandages wrapped aorund both hands..
as to hide the deep cuts..
the glass painted red.. reflects... the blood.
dripping from.. her hands to her.. shoe strings.
he comes...
slowly..
says.. hold your hands out..
she rejects him..
hiding her bloody palms..
behind her back..
he shivers slightly.
looks to the left and sees,, the dead body.. pale and celestial..
lying limp..
unmoving..
he turns to her face..
a grin.. plastered like a kindergarten plydo..
she is smiling..
she walking toward him.. smiling and caresses his cheeks..
plants a kiss
a bloody kiss.
on his palm..

he says.. did you ..
she knods..
why...
i love you..
I LOVE YOU....
IIIIIIIIIII LOVEEEEEEEEE YOUUUUUUUUUU...
SHE SCREAMS..
HE TURNS HIS HEAD TO THE RIGHT..
A BLOOD MURAL PANTED WITH CARE..
a love scene..
erotic in every nature.. so stunning and erotic.. he hardens..
he is disgusted,, but,, he hardens a the sexual fansty..
bloody ND DELICIOUS..
HE WANTS HER ..
he pulls her to him..
slowly undoing her dress..
he kisses her in heat and in passion.
he lays her down
and enters slowly..
pacing himself in her agony..
he waits...
pulls out the gun.. and thrust.. harder..
HARDER..
HARDER............
LOADS THE PISTOL..
SHE.. SCRE.....
SILENCE...
DISMISSED.. IN HER PAIN..
HE LAUGHS

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Date Submitted: Jul 16, 2009 (04:33 AM)
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  THEMANBEHINDTH...
07/16/09 (04:49 PM) 
u need a hug but i love this one for real baby

  คว...
07/16/09 (11:11 AM) 
wow...this is really wicked....like twisted and demented love...crazy scene you painted with your visual descriptions..the background picture is awesome..ties in really well...very dark and eerie piece...

  Ms. Hollywood
07/16/09 (11:11 AM) 
damn. this is twisted.. unheard of... and i loved it. but the ending had me like damn....

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