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"Crazy [Ramblings Of She]"
  by .candice.



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She said:

I have nothing to hide
yet hiding behind shadows
little miss sunshine
with a clouded soul
seeming so shallow
sometimes I'm drowning
in high tides that are only
waist deep
living life
with eyes wide shut
and still losing sleep
making up my own bed
in which
I'll never lay
steadily promising tomorrows
when I didn't keep today
and to even make sense
of what I'm talking 'bout
is like telling a man
with no legs
to 'gon head
and walk it out
it's just that crazy...

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Date Submitted: Apr 23, 2008 (12:09 AM)
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Date: 04/23/08 (12:26 AM)
Author: Catalina
Poem Title: Crazy (I Talk To Mys...

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  stranger
07/22/09 (06:36 AM) 
Overwhelmed with the sheer poetry of this bro' ... instant favourite , pure flow, a traesure , what can I say, I love it cos' it goes so far beyond the words :) [ and take a stroll over sometime if you fancy a break and a cuppa]

  Lyrical Prince...
06/27/09 (05:36 PM) 
this is the kind of poetry that kick starts me. you always write what i can't put together in completion. this was ever so timely. and despite the background image and the mood set by the poem you still keep up a sick sense of humor, telling a legless man to walk it out. shoot! i'm loving this though.

  big josh
06/13/09 (02:52 PM) 
whoa, this was heavy I'm feeling the depth of this right here, this was very nice

  KingNate
05/07/09 (10:43 AM) 
candice candice candice...here yo go again...love it tho

  Ne'Sha
04/13/09 (02:10 AM) 
I read this about 4 times and i think it got better and better each time i read it. cudos on an wonderful write. we all gotta get a little crazy now and again.

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