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"Crucifixion of a Poet"
  by leethal
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Unjustified Crucifixion by LyricalDiva


I am lead through the valleys
But I fear no evil
I swagger from side to side
As I hear cheers from
The people
I wear a dunce cap perhaps,
Not a crown of thorns
I peer up through my tears
To see a cloud of storms
I am stoned and it pierces the flesh
To my bones
My stomachs turning as I see
Them burning my poems
I reach my final destination,
The celebration continues
I am condemned for scripting
Sexual innuendos
Or not writing quite like other
Men do
Not to mention, countless
other sins too
Two pencils, one planted in the
Ground protruding
Me being God is
Not what I’m eluding
What I’m doing is stating
I’m godlike
I was made in God’s
Image, right?
Okay, don’t lose sight of
This visual sisters and
Brothers
The other pen perpendicular
But attached to the other
One of my palms are nailed
To one end
But my right hand is nailed
To the point of the pen
My feet are not nailed,
But they’re dangling
My head tilted to
The side angling
My throat strangling
From thirst
My critics down below
Throw their worst
Sticks, stones and verbal
Assaults at me
If I fell off this penciled cross
Who would catch me?

“I awake to me glaring up into the Heavens and my God staring back at me. No words are exchanged, but his wink gives me all of the truth I need to know”

I pick up my pen, scoop up my poems from the ashes and keep doin’ what I’m doin…
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Date Submitted: Sep 11, 2009 (02:13 PM)
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  Hart N. Soul
11/20/09 (02:01 AM) 
I honestly have no words to describe the wisdom conveyed in this piece. Leethal if there ever was time I could only favor one poem. I have to say this would be it! You really outdid yourself sir. Excellent and of course a fav.

  atillathepun
11/09/09 (07:35 PM) 
best poem i've read since i've been on here I'm new to the site...check me out though I use a lotta wordplay and metaphors too

  DownAzzNinja
11/09/09 (06:16 PM) 
Struggle. You know, most would struggle with the crucifixion metephor, but I liked the wood, the earthy and, so real, pencils. Remember to forgive them, even though they drank that haterade, for they know not what they do. I liked it, but I think that it should be simplified from the introduction of the perpendicular pencils. As soon as I know they are the wood you are being nailed to the visual comes quite easily. the truth comes easy, the poetry comes a lil harder!

  after vision
11/09/09 (01:51 PM) 
love the breaths taken for me in this piece --- Two pencils, one planted in the Ground protruding Me being God is Not what I’m eluding What I’m doing is stating I’m godlike -- hard - hard - hard

  ThepureBlackpo...
11/09/09 (10:20 AM) 
I want to say, This is pure madness, and when you start these scriptures it begs to question, where is the mind centered when it all begins until the very end...And this is why i think, I can't leave poetry alone....and getting my dose of you work...And I respect it to the fullest,,,I told you, I be seeing you....

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