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"cruise"
  by poetry_gurl07


you say its childish
and i say im fed up
but like fly paper im stuck despit the fact ive had enough
been in this rut but
now ive recognized it
here come the part where i formulate to
make my escape
youd be suprised if i
left and slipped away in the night
but i cant bring myself to do it so i just
cruise
play the hearts while i plan to fold everyday and
you say "IM" useless
so i hang my head
when in truth its
not me its YOU!
wake up and smell what you do
cuz the voodoo's worn off
and now im done with you too
made a fool of me
but now these tears are like fire upon your skin
burned whatever was left of the man
and leaves only a withering pathetic worthless shell of a boy!
just because im here for the ride
doesnt mean im in the backseat
so though i
cruise
for the moment
dont take my silence for weakness
mistake my
passive nature for
a whimp
a punk
if i must
i do what i have to
but as of now i just
cruise.
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Date Submitted: May 11, 2009 (03:04 PM)
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  enjay
05/28/09 (02:15 PM) 
dang guuh u went off on dis 1....very emotional about da situation...datz gud...and u kno how 2 do voodoo 2...*shit i aint aint even gonna try 2 get on yo bad side...* lol...j/p...but newayz...dis a 10 4rm me..stay up..ghost ~*N-Love*~

  Cornfed
05/28/09 (10:13 AM) 
Very well done pen! Enjoyed the read!

  Jill Michelle
05/27/09 (02:42 PM) 
"as of now i just cruise"..loved it. nothing else to say. 10

  NeoSoulphrodis...
05/13/09 (08:33 PM) 
very nice gurl. It said, but at lease you learn for this experience and now your able to cruise... A lot of emotion.. very nice.

  Elicit
05/13/09 (03:51 PM) 
Very emotional

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