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"CURIOSITY"
A touchdapearl2 and trinabeana Collaboration


  trinabeana:

I'm intrugued in what you are after
but my satistisfation will be frank in the matter
confronting my tatted doubt
you are laughing while you are tasting with your mount
but I hold it wit such flatter
since I'm intrigued with what you have to offer...

  touchdapearl2:

Let your guard down
fear me not
the complexity of your mental is what drives me further to you
my motivation is to see how lost inside your mental
one can get
the depths of your soul
is truelly outstanding to me
curious vessel you are
you are very inquisitive in the matter
your carefulness is a very interresting quality
which makes me compelled to seek you more


  trinabeana:

seeing the love of my structure is pure
relaxing in my seat I bring to you sultry demure
though the thought of one's depictments are of countless enlightment and flatter
I do see the blossoms in our conjured, collabarate frontier
I fall face front through the entrapment that you use to induse me
I lead with my blood vessels which is acoustically drawn to your melodies
sewn in a meaningful weave full of thoughts of your unbelieveable capture
like the bands that plays of sychronizied leisure

  touchdapearl2:

let me preserve the peace
my wisdom surely exceeds self
i wouldnt want to bruise your thoughts before I have a chance to cyfer your soul
figure your make
your appeasing to say the least
you posse great intricacy
the fact that you think you have the knowledge to withstand me
with my spellbounding vision it want be long before you are deep into me.....
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Date Submitted: Jul 29, 2008 (06:08 AM)
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  ENNA
08/12/08 (04:40 AM) 
girl dont listen to blood singer i love it ya flowed well together

  jaysin
07/30/08 (03:33 PM) 
i see when you two get together the words start flowing i love the concept the rhyme is most def on point i dig the whole thing ladies..yall did ya thing

  B. Rose
07/29/08 (02:23 PM) 
Well I get it... I see whats going on... This was a nice concept... nice job yall two...

  angeleyes1
07/29/08 (11:05 AM) 
very nicely you both did you flowed all the way keep the pen moving much love to you

  touchdapearl2
07/29/08 (06:21 AM) 
ANYWAY....i think we did very well on this piece and i hope everyone take a look at the title and grab the concept of the poem thks

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