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""CURIOUSITY HITS THE OTHER SIDE""
  by P.Y.T


WILL I EVER BE ABLE TO REST IN PEACE?
I WONDER
OR WILL THERE BE OTHER DEATHS AFTER ME
I'M 6FT UNDER
LEFT MOTHER EARTH 2 A BETTER PLACE
IM DICEASE
CAN MY SOUL FLY LIKE FEATHERS
OR AM I FALLEN UNDER THESE STREETS
CALLED HELL ON EARTH
YES IT HURTS,TO KNOW
THAT I BROKE THE PEACE
FACE ON A WHITE T
SEEIN ALL MY LOVE ONES HURT
IT HURTS ME BUT THERES NO PAIN
CAUSE PAIN IS MEMORIES
THATS WHAT I NEED
TO KNOW THAT I EXISTED
THATS ALL WHATS LEFT OF ME
BULLET CAME BY I MISSED IT
BUT IT HIT ME
I DIDN'T SEE ALL THIS LOVE
NOW IT'S PAIN AND MISERY
CUZ IM SLEEP
NOW I DAY DREAM
BOUT WHAT I LEFT BEHIND
THEFT MY MIND
MAYBE U CAN SUCCEED
WHAT THEY TELLIN ME
OVER MY CASKET BEFORE IT CLOSE
YELLIN AT ME
DEF TO THEIR WORDS IM COLD
IT'S THE SPELL IN ME
THEY SAY NO ONE CAN REPLACE ME
I'M THINKIN YEA I KNO
I WAS CHOSEN FROM THE PAST U WERE SHOWN
BUT I JUS GOTTA BE
FAMILY I GOTTA GO
HOPEFULLY THERE IS PEACE
SENCERELY UR GUARDIAN ANGEL
WILL I EVER BE ABLE TO REST IN PEACE?


(I WROTE THIS WRITE CUZ IT'S REAL..HAVE U JUS EVER JUS SAT DOWN N THINK ABOUT THE FUTURE..WHAT MIGHT HAPPEN THE NEXT DAY WILL IT BE GOOD OR BAD...THANK U GS 4 READING THIS)
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Date Submitted: Jul 01, 2007 (01:13 AM)
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  Poetik assasin
09/05/09 (08:07 PM) 
ok, i see you miss lady. i'm digging it. You are quite prolific. Much respect to you

  Slicc Capone
02/19/09 (05:34 PM) 
deep ma i feel like that sometimes good write

  Lique
11/30/08 (01:18 AM) 
u already know you're not alone in thinking on this level-those of us that take time to think about life etc we're the ones that understand there's more out there and definitely something or someONE greater. I do appreciate this piece ma and I have wondered what this and that person is thinking about watching us mourn or watching and waiting over their body in iraq/wherever some even wondering if they'll be found...heartache and heartbreak I'm blessed to have my cuzn home safe now

  WISDOM21
11/22/08 (01:40 AM) 
THIS IS HOT MA..I THINK ABOUT DAT A LOT SINCE I'M IN IRAQ. THIS IS DEF' A REALITY CHECK..GREAT WRITE MA..10 STARS

  StraY12
11/19/08 (05:09 PM) 
Yes....yes I have then I often forget bout the good and bad...other then that this had a real strong presence to it...I'm likin' ya vibe on this, keep doin' what you doin' your style is disgustin'...??? In a good way!

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