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"DA MESSAGE"
  by RIDGEBOY RELL


I GOTA MINDSTATE,
DAT OTHA MINDS HATE,
AND WEN I STEP ON DA BLOCK MONEY I MAKE,
AND WHY I WALK WIT MY GLOCK CHECK DA CRIME RATE,
AND BLACK OR WHITE, WHITE OR BLACK COPS I HATE, YOU,
RELL TELL IT LIKE IT IS,
AND LIFE IS A BITCH IT WANT LET NOBODY LIVE,
AND UMM, HOMEBOY YOU WANNA BEEF DEN DA DEAL IS DONE,
I GOT MINES I HOPE U GOT YOSELF A GUN,
CUZ NOW AND DAYS NIGGAS TALK ABOUT GUN PLAY,
GUN PLAY, YALL A HAVE TO RUN IF MY GUN PLAY,
SO JUS CHILL, LET DA REAL BE REAL,
DONT TRY TO BE A G, CUZ U MIGHT GET KILLED,
SEE I PLAY DA FEILD WIT SKILLS,
AND NEVA FUCK WIT FAKES, AND IF U FLOSS YA CASH DEN ITS YA CASH I TAKE,
I FIGURE IF I ROB A NIGGA TO GET PAYED I WANT HAVE TO WAIT,
DATS CASH MONEY FAST MONEY DAT I MADE TODAY,
AND ITS SAD TO SAY,
DA SLEEZY WAY IS EASY PAY WE NEED TO PRAY FOR PEACE TODAY,
CUZ IT NEVA FAILS FOR DA HEAT TO SPRAY NO NEED TO SAY WERE HE WUD LAY,
OR SHOULD I SAY HOW DEEP HE WUD,
AINT IT FUNNY HOW DA FAKE DIE HOOD,
WHILE DA GOOD DIE YOUNG, AND US THUGS DIE UMM,
IN DA WORSE WAYS,
MY NIGGA DIED A KID, HE WANT BE DA LAST,
AND HIS IS SHOULD NOT DA FIRST GRAVE,
AND IM TIRED OF SAYIN REST IN PEACE,
AND TO MY DEAD PEEPS,
WHEN I SLEEP, IN MY DREAMS MAY DEY REST WIT ME,
AND GRANDMA I WISH U WERE HERE TO SEE,
WAT YA GRANDSON GREW UP TO BE,
AND U WANT BELIEVE,
DAT OTHA MINDS HATE, MY MINDSTATE,
CUZ IM ONLY 17 I GUESS I SHOULDNT SAY DA SHIT I SAY,
OR MAYBE CUZ I FEEL LIKE FUCK A BITCH,
IMA G 17, IT AINT NO TOUCHIN DIS,
AND UMM, I AINT SAYIN IM UNTOUCHABLE HOMIE,
IM JUS SAYIN I DONT WANT YA HANDS ON ME,
AND I HATE WEN PEOPLE SAY LIVE AND LEARN, LIKE IM DA ONE NEEDIN A LESSON,
JUS LISTEN TO MY RHYMES IM DA NIGGA SENDIN DA MESSAGE
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Date Submitted: Jun 15, 2007 (08:35 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/16/07 (04:25 AM)
Author: Nilla
Poem Title: Aggy Freestyle

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comment icon  COMMENTS (119)
  Timah
01/17/08 (04:12 PM) 
man im loven dis one it's bomb-B keep it up sexy!!

  night light
01/17/08 (01:44 PM) 
Nicely done. I love the word play and the flow was flawless. You did your thing on this one. 10 stars.

  Theraputic Ivo...
01/16/08 (01:46 AM) 
all i can say is 10 starz, love the flow and the emotions you put into it.

  Moocy
01/16/08 (01:21 AM) 
this right here is hot... I think if you put a beat to it and make it a song that it would definately be something I'd listen to. It flows very nicely and wow... you have major skills sweetie

  Shamma
01/16/08 (01:16 AM) 
you got a definite flow...

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