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"Da Path to Eden"
  by The Clinician


(I got da hook off a gospel song my girl was singing to me)

Lets go back to Eden; live on top of the world
Lets go back to Eden; live on top of the world
Lets go back to Eden; live on top of the world
Lets go back to Eden ;live on top of the world

She said she wanna go back to Eden
Cleansing dis paraplegic populations bleeding
Of sinful blood domesticated from devastations breeding
Caused from the cursed spread of evils infestation of the Devils semen
See men are like seamen wanting to ride and stick they boat deeper into da currents cut getting wet by its tidal waves causing their pulsating yet pleasurable gratification
They become squirrels hunting for their nuts containing that exotic toxin that burns them to da point of castration
Feeling immune to this poison they take the risk of quickening deadly satisfaction all so they can get dat pleasurable nut to soften their hardened stimulation
Instead of configuring the nuts and bolts of their mind to rationalize their primitive way of thinking enabling them to optimize
Now dats nuts! If u can consequence visualize
People become possessed by their own sexual apostrophes
Slaves to ecstasy losing their self-efficacy
They succumb to da hypocrisy of da government’s bureaucracy
Stating we’re a country that one should not have to fear as long as they living
Yet they decrease da Native American populace to 3% because they melted them with their genocidal acid rain leaving behind trails of tears calling it Thanksgiving
They say were a country embodied by democracy and constitutional freedoms of equality
Yet they hinder womens pay in contrast to their testicular fortitude and elicit their white privileged Jim Crow Negro policy secreted in their top secret confidentiality
They say we will adhere to da voice of Honest Abes Emancipation Proclamation to keep da free from being irate
Yet they shackle us with lies, negative connotations, self-profitable statistics and racist hindrances leading us to a gyrated fate
Of SELF prophecies projected from the SELFish in an endeavor to make themselves look SELFless
Causing our SELF mutilation due to lack of SELF worth and so we journey to Eden to find that SELF truth making us SELF prodigious
Breaking the complacent hinges barricaded by blasphemes bigotry brigading bistro
Damaging dastardly deeds damned demands disdained distaste deemed dramatically drastic due to its distorted dro
I present to you the consultation Eden proposes
As I lead thee to the promise land with rhetorical eloquence becoming poetry’s Moses

Lets go back to Eden live on top of the world
Lets go back to Eden live on top of the world
Lets go back to Eden live on top of the world
Lets go back to Eden live on top of the world
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Date Submitted: Nov 03, 2009 (09:56 PM)
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  ThepureBlackpo...
11/18/09 (11:17 PM) 
I KNOW I COMMENTED ON THIS POEM BEFORE, BUT I THINK IT DESERVES IT TWICE, MAN SOMETIMES I JUST COME HERE AND READ, JUST BECAUSE MY MIND NEEDS TO BREATHE AND JUST GO AT EASE, LIKE DAM YOU SPIT PURE PEACE, I KNOW PEOPLE COME TO YOUR PAGE, AND JUST READ WHILE THEY EAT, OR IS THAT JUST ME...OH WELL, GUILTY AS CHARGED....MAN, NO HOMO....I ADMIRE YOU, REAL TALK...YOUR MINDSET IS JUST WHERE IT NEEDS TO BE, DONT CHANGE FOR THE WORLD...I GOT A TAG FOR YOU, WELCOME TO WORLD CLINIC, I THINK IM ABOUT TO PEN...
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  Greg Gatsby
11/17/09 (09:49 AM) 
Ahhh Im so glad I clicked this, Im always impressed with your work and this surely did not disappoint...this is why I faved you brotha!! your diction is nuts

  nieceyspeaks
11/13/09 (10:47 PM) 
im speechless... creativity is an understatement.. this is why i love poetry... keep pushing that pen...well done!!

  Elektricq
11/13/09 (07:47 PM) 
well damn. i kinda lost my words on this one...WOW. i have sat here for a minute, still speechless, mouth open and all. truth, truth, TRUTH. qon head MOSES! :)

  W_J_lyriC
11/11/09 (10:41 PM) 
As always it has been an honor reading one of your pieces. Every time I finish one I have to sit back and let it all sink in. Powerful piece Clinician, keep the pen moving.

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