GS Poetry Home
Home
GS Blog
Media
Events
      Poems      Poets      Submit Poems      Collaboetry      SoulCasts     


 
GS Poetry
 
     
           

Your Ad Here

   
  arrow TO .::$OLO_BOY.::916's POEM g-mille's NEXT POEM arrow  
     
     
  
"DA REAL ME"
  by g-mille


I've ben cheated, lied on, mistreated, and hurt
But it seems like around here, no one kno's my true worth
I jus wish ever'one cud see da real me,
I'm actually very sweet
I mean yea I may fuck up sometimez, but nobody's perfect
But cha' kno wat I dnt care, cause my man still think I'm worth it
Yea, Im a virgin, but people think othawise
But, hey they can neva see that through their eyes
They treat me different cuz of the way I dress
They all think its hundreds that Im tryn to impress
Seriously Im no different I swear
Ijus want to be normal like ever'one else
My man says he loves me, and there's nothing he wants to change about me
I feel terrible to have these burdens on me,
I jus want all these lies to be set free
But one day I will sho' da world dat Im God's little girl
And jus maybe, maybe they will see, dat dis little girl right here is DA REAL ME!!
© 2000-2009 GS Poetry. All rights reserved.
search icon
Date Submitted: Dec 04, 2006 (05:06 PM)
search icon
Viewed: 142  times
user icon
Poem Favorited By: 2 Members
send the poem to friend
   
     
lock Log in to add this poem to your favorites.



comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (0)

No poem responses yet. Click here to be the first!!

 


comment icon  COMMENTS (20)
  Tha Future Of ...
11/10/07 (10:13 AM) 
MAn thats hot and its cool to be a virgin ang think differently you have to not only be different and think different you got to make your style of different cool. Like I don drink or smoke and in Tallahassee that's all everyone does but I let em know w/o being lame thas not my thing and eventually people come to respect it and if they don't FUCK EM but hot poem tho

  Bree Bree
10/13/07 (04:09 PM) 
awww. we go thru this shit sometimes. maybe they cant handle the realness. lol. but i feel you for real, but fucc em!! lol

  STREET
09/05/07 (02:20 AM) 
DAMM I FEEL U ON THIS LOVE IT GOOD topic good write GOOD FLOW GOOD VOCAB GOOD WORK KEEP IT UP HOLLA BACK AT SUM OF MINE U FEEL ME

  InFamouZ1
08/30/07 (07:47 PM) 
nice write what I say yo that is for get what erybody else tbinks you do you can't nobody steal that from you all you really need to know who you are is you because regardless what most may think god already knows you so yea ma you do you and keep up with the good write

  Versatile
08/28/07 (02:57 PM) 
wow i like this one. I like how you expressed urself thru the good and bad times .Nice

Page(s): 1  2  3  4 
lock Log In to comment on this poem.
     
     
  arrow TO .::$OLO_BOY.::916's POEM g-mille's NEXT POEM arrow  



 
Site Links
About GS Poetry
FAQs
Testimonials
GS Gold Membership
Links
Copyright Information
Contact Us
 
Site Features
Buy Credits
Promote GS
Events
Collaboetry
Soulcast
Poet Search
RSS icon RSS Feeds
 
GSoul Baby-Tees
GSoul Baby-Tees
Support GS and urban poetry by purchasing an official GSoul Baby-Tee. Order Now!
 
Donate
Help GS continue its efforts to maintain a creative and supportive poetry site. Any amount is welcomed and appreciated.
 



© GS Poetry 2000-2008.  All rights reserved. Terms of Use | Privacy