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"Daddy loves me"
  by Lani


You said you love me
Daddy it’s a first
Because you took so long to say it
I’ve always thought the worst

I know I’m a bad child
Left the nest when wasn’t ready
But I fell in love
And couldn’t take it steady

You say alcohols my mistake
But I think it’s my gift
Because normally I ring
And hang up too quick

But with a can or few
I had encouraged myself
And if it wasn’t for your words
I would have ruined my health

Dad now that you love me
I feel its all ok
Maybe one time in the future
Ill come down and stay

And we can laugh together
On I bottle of wine
And just for that day
You’ll be a daddy of mine.
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Date Submitted: Mar 13, 2007 (08:21 PM)
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  KaspaKat
07/12/07 (02:27 AM) 
Awwww.... That's so sweet. How could he not love you hun? You're the best thing that ever happened to him but he just doesn't realise it. xoxox

  22dcentpoet
03/30/07 (12:35 AM) 
great write but always love yourself first dear....we at gs have love for you

  tenayathebread
03/27/07 (07:03 PM) 
very nice

  porkchops
03/27/07 (01:40 AM) 
ANOTHER GREAT WRITE

  JBurgos123
03/14/07 (03:54 PM) 
this poem rocks you shuld make mor

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