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"DAM YOUR BREATH STINK"
  by touchdapearl2


girl you need a mint
not just a bit
here's one quick
and dont chew it ,let it sit
and simmer a bit
and im not just talking shit
your breath smells like pure horse shit
cant you tell your breath smells
my eyelids are swollen
and nose hair is curled
your stories are starting to sound like pure bullshit
cause I cant get pass the smell of your spit
even your cough smells like shit
i offered you a mint because you wouldnt take it in stick
and even stated that winterfresh was the shit
but you passed
and now you got the nerve to start whispering shit
oh hell no i gotta to go
i gotta to get away from this HOE
the stench is now making me have to shit
matter of fact its making me just plain sick....


P.S CHECK YOUR BREATH PEOPLE!
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Date Submitted: Jul 28, 2008 (01:55 AM)
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  trp
11/24/08 (04:33 PM) 
okay girl do we be by the same people or what my piece ''why me'' is talking about the same stuff stinky ass people . funny piece

  K.A.S. THE LYR...
11/23/08 (02:27 AM) 
now this funny...but real at the same time...people do not seem to know when a dragon breathing out their mouth....nice...lol

  A.C.H.
11/10/08 (06:37 PM) 
I like this poem because I teach 3rd grade and about 3/4 of those kids' breath smell as if they haven't brushed it in weeks. It stinks so bad it burns my eye. I have a three feet away rule because of the kids' breath. - "the inspired one"

  bbeauty
11/08/08 (07:33 PM) 
GIRL THIS HAD ME IN TEARS......I SURPRISE THAT I DIDN'T READ THIS ONE EARLIER.......10+STARS LAUGHTER IS MEDICINE FOR THE SOUL....... B BLESS

  HoneyB
11/07/08 (02:32 PM) 
ha ha ha ha lmao.....faf........damn that shit wuz funny this is a fav

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