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"Damaged"
  by B. Rose


(Pleiades)

Damaged
Deameanor
Destroyed by acts of opposite of
Delicate tatics utilized on the heart
Damn, there is no worse pain then when your heart
Delivers
Deafening silence... Now love for you is presumed
Doomed...
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Date Submitted: Jul 22, 2008 (05:01 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (2)
Date: 07/26/08 (02:23 AM)
Author: AzIz
Poem Title: Raparations

Date: 07/22/08 (09:45 AM)
Author: Ordained Misfit
Poem Title: Damaged

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comment icon  COMMENTS (27)
  Untouched_Soul
02/21/09 (04:55 PM) 
oh wow Ihave so felt that emotion in your final lines and it does feel like damnation ... enjoying your pen young sir

  Ms. Sincerious
07/29/08 (09:49 AM) 
"when your heart delivers deafening silence".. i was diggin that line right there...

  Moz' Wizdom
07/27/08 (04:37 PM) 
Nice work. Very deep.

  'x'GhOsT'x'
07/27/08 (02:33 AM) 
I'm feeling this because this was crazy and it means so much but also its deep and I liked the style you used cause its creative but yeah 10 stars I'm really feeling this ya digggggggggggg!

  LiquidFire
07/26/08 (01:50 PM) 
Damn, damn, when your heart delivers deafing silence. Now that did it for me, my heart been quiet for a while now....

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