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"Damaged"
  by MR. BYRD


***Sometimes it's hard to smile when faced with adversity, drama or anything that you feel corrupted in your life.....just hold on....don't quit...just handle your business ya dig....

We feel damaged thoughts that harbored our pain,
So is it right to feel we can leave our hearts in the rain
In the midst of debris that we are victimized by hurt
Will life's alarm sound off so we can be more alert
Lovers can no longer comprehend what love truly is
Have we lost our sensitivity, sympathy and natural affection
Some wish they had a fifth of ambition
So they wouldn't find themselves in different positions
Fluid dreams for a dry reality; why the fuck should we drink to tragedy
Are we sick? Do we suffer from Munchausen Syndrome?
I guess we're trapped in the system.....
The system that makes us believe we are too naive
To know about reformation....reconstitute our minds
We gotta flush out life's agitations
Otherwise, we will have no serenity
Paranoid in our own identity, to make you become your ownworst enemy
It's clear to me that we will continue to scramble for answers
Search for clues, for writing emotions is our muse
So I ask again, can anyone taste my views?????
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Date Submitted: Jun 20, 2009 (04:56 PM)
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  johnnielovesja...
07/17/09 (02:51 PM) 
wow this was a really good write its a hard read but once i readit twice i got da message 10 starz i like the form you wrote in to

  Μz Ρ...
07/02/09 (06:06 PM) 
interesting thoughts penned mr byrd! Love this write ..it shows me between the lines you are a peoples person! you care about the suffering around ...great write x

  Lady_Style
07/01/09 (06:41 PM) 
"Paranoid in our own identity, to make you become your own worst enemy" This piece is pure fire. I loved every word of it, if i could rate more than 10 starz i certainly would. Brilliant scribe xx

  22sunflower
06/29/09 (08:48 PM) 
ok then that had my undivided attention "paranoid in our own identity" this deserves more than 10 strz.

  Maxine
06/29/09 (01:41 PM) 
you know... I got 4 lines into this and fav'd it....cuz I knew it was more than worthy....I felt every line as my chest burned deeply....seriously..... Loved it.... esp the first 5 lines...hit me deep....

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