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"Damn He Got Lyrics....."
  by Sweettweety23


His words touched my soul
I mean cut through all my layers
And pierced
MY
SOUL
Causing my true essence
To leak through the wound
And I knew
At that moment
The moment I read
THOSE
WORDS
That never before had I
Been
Whole…
COMPLETE
His method…..so powerful
His rhythm….so sweet
His words were
Sharp and deadly
Yet easy and calming
Pulling me in
Ever so
S L O W L Y
Contradicting my thoughts
Yet making perfect sense
Like they came from inside me
Like I birthed them
But he raised them
Like I love them
But he claims them
He’s my……
I finally found
MY
COUNTERPOINT
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Date Submitted: Nov 03, 2008 (03:27 PM)
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  touchdapearl2
12/10/08 (12:36 AM) 
uhm i wish i find mine! hell im digging thru all this rubbish...dam im tired

  Snickaz
12/09/08 (09:36 AM) 
awwwwww. yea. i must agree. a man with WORDS...not game. but WORDS...is sexy as hell in his own way. words to me can jus get to me like dat.lol. but i mean a slight attraction must also be present. its jus how it goes.lol. but this was really gud. i likey...lol

  phire fly
12/09/08 (09:24 AM) 
That was amazing.........it was short but the flow of it and the power of the words you used was on point. This was a fav. Thank you for writing this.

  THE TRUE LADY ...
11/06/08 (11:20 PM) 
WOOOOOW! MMMM. ONE OF MY FAVORITES. CLASSIC!

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