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"Dangerous Love"
  by Poo-pie






She kept the clip
On the hip
Cause he was a trip
When he tripped
And he skipped
The abuse classes
So the abuse passes
As an excuse
He used
For anger
No stranger
To danger
She carried a "piece"
Hoping a piece
Would bring peace
And piece
By piece
He pushed her "trigger"
And he was bigger
But no nigger
Could figure
Why
She wouldn't cry
She wouldn't die
By his hands
So the plan
Went from her head to her chest
And she wanted to put him to rest
Cause the best
Was long gone
And it's all song
But she wasn't singing
Thinking,
'I'm not showing no love"
To this thug
So she drove to his mama house
And now the "drama" out
Said his lover twice removed
And her next move
Had heat
That dropped him to his feet
And then came the white sheets
As he played the concrete
Three shots to the dome
And she was gone
Before they arrived
Before he died
He flipped the "bird"
And tipped the "curse"
Meaning a woman scorned
And a woman torn
Was never suppose to be
She was never suppose to see
But now she doing ten
In the pen
With a note hanging up saying, "I lost a friend"
~Poo-pie~

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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2009 (08:06 PM)
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  LadyJaye
11/19/09 (04:48 PM) 
o wow this is very moving i am digging this i know it is messed up in a way but it true things like this happen WOW

  jassie
11/17/09 (04:29 PM) 
omg i love this..........most can relate but not me i can't kill for love but this is solid love the flow the postion yyuo put the woman in was like woow.....wonderful write=) kiss

  REALKISSES
11/16/09 (03:06 PM) 
wow this is def deep.... i could relate in ways to this... and its sad to say alot of us ladies can relate to this.. i have to fav this ...

  NeshaW1
11/16/09 (03:06 PM) 
MAN THIS IS AS REAL AS IT GETS...I DONT EVEN KNOW HOW TO EXPRESS THE WAY I FEEL ABOUT THIS BUT WOOOOOOW U DID THAT. BEING ABUSED WOULD MAKE U DO THAT BUT THATS ONLY WEN U R SICK AND TIRED OF GOING THRU THE SAME THING AND THE ONLY WAY U FEEL U CAN ESCAPE OR GET REVENGE IS IF U HURT THEM AS MUCH OR MORE THAN THEY'VE HURT U...THIS WAS DEEP I LIKES AND I FAVOR THIS..KEEP THAT INK FLOWIN:)

  Babiigirl2245
11/16/09 (02:59 PM) 
this is very hear felt and emotion its very well written and u can tell u put a lot into this poem

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