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"dark & lovely remix"
  by Mz. G.M.B
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Dark & Lovely by B. Rose


Your skin
Reminds me of

A warm summer night
Enough to make me sweat
But a cool breeze to calm me down

My favorite thing to eat
Nice and soft and just enough sweet
Melt in my soul, not in my hands


Just enough
satisfaction
relaxation
tranquility
serenity
humility
struggle
strength

The mere sight of yu plays with my thoughts
Enticing ? Yes
Disappointing ? Never
Your skin amuses my mind at levels yu will never know
So dark & lovely yu are !

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Date Submitted: Mar 23, 2009 (03:42 PM)
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  K.A.S. THE LYR...
03/27/09 (04:12 AM) 
"Just enough satisfaction relaxation tranquility serenity humility struggle strength "......excellent response....you did justice to first "DARK & LOVELY" POEM

  BlessedOne
03/25/09 (09:25 PM) 
This is a great response lady! You make me wanna go get a chocolate bar and just savor it. lol [Just enough satisfaction, relation, tranquility, serenity, humility, struggle, strength] All of these things combined make a wonderful dark & lovely.

  B. Rose
03/23/09 (04:38 PM) 
Thats a beautiful response babygirl... definitely did your thing

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