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"Deadliest Sin"
  by Ambie


So what if fucked him?!
Hell maybe you would have to,
But should i have done since he won't leave me alone?
He think that he owns me,
But he does since he stole my values
A big part of me,

In a church?
Damn what was I thinking?
Yeah, church girls are the worst they say,
And what about my man now,
I swear to him I'm a virgin like him,
But the truth will stain the relationship.

The lust in his eyes, his voice,
How much ignorance is in me?
I shouldn't have done it
I face the truth alone,
I'll say it never happened
My innocence was never gone....
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Date Submitted: May 27, 2008 (12:13 AM)
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  MizzJess09
01/25/09 (06:43 PM) 
damn...fuckin in da church...dat's jus wrong lol. but seriously nice write.

  williesidney
11/16/08 (09:11 AM) 
Nice really nice write you told it like it is and that what makes a good write keep uding your gift you have too bless others ten stars.

  Will Shakes
06/04/08 (11:35 PM) 
i confess to havin sex in church.....a deadly sin indeed.....but good write 10

  PoeticSoulja
06/02/08 (11:51 PM) 
A depiction of girl lamenting the decision that she made in the past.These stanzas were created excellently and the write deserves a ten star rating.Keep up the good work my friend.

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