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"Dear God........I'm Listening!"
  by Sweettweety23


Dear God
Beautiful lives begin and end
Just like the seasons
But I know for everything that happens
You have your reasons
Life gets rough sometimes
But I try not to complain
I know my problems don’t compare to most
And I’d just be using your name in vain
I know it seems like I’ve been losing faith
And I stopped counting my blessings
But really I haven’t
I just been trying to keep up with all these Life Lessons
I know I don’t have to tell you
You hear everything I say, you see everything I do
And I don’t have to go to church every Sunday
For you to know that my heart is true
I admit that too often
I only call you when I need you
I am so sorry God
Because you truly are in everything
And I know I am supposed to praise you when I see you
My only fear is disappointing you
I hope I am who you want me to be
I’m living thru rights, wrongs, trails, and errors
If I’m going the wrong way
God please speak to me
I’m listening……
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Date Submitted: Jul 27, 2008 (10:42 PM)
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  Skittlezz
11/11/08 (01:44 PM) 
This was a great write... i'm lovin it... **SKITTLEZZ**

  gangtalicious
11/01/08 (06:46 PM) 
dis was nicely dun 10 starz

  lavish
08/13/08 (12:46 PM) 
absoulutley beatiful love this right so much 10 starz

  Ezdozit
07/29/08 (11:02 AM) 
beautiful it is very heartfelt i love this one you are very talented with your flow

  THE TRUE LADY ...
07/28/08 (10:52 PM) 
i love this one! u know my situation so u know that this touched me. awww Na! *tear* dang girl. we in this together, i told u that. I thank God for a friend like you, cause although we get each other into some things sometimes we can always get each other out. we're each others balance.

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