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"Dear Loren"
  by Hyper


Dear Loren,
You came out from "ANGEL's" shit
Here you are now.
No, crying, No pain.
You know why...
hahahahahaha
Cuz I have fuck the pain.

Too many times.
I have told u she isn't worth it.
Too many times
I wanted to give up but I didn't.
Too many times.
I encouraged you to move on.
You listened to me.

Now I am here helping you.
Cuz you need me and I need you.
I was right!!!
She doesn't deserve your love and care.
You have showed her that you love her.
But she didn't care.

You have dumped all the memories.
Now memory is the past.
That I don't want to go back to.

I Want to THANK YOU for moving on.
I Love You Loren
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Date Submitted: Dec 15, 2008 (08:01 AM)
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  C,08
05/11/09 (10:29 AM) 
Fuck was up with that 1st line. Like everything after that was kool but the start throw me off heavy. but all n all it was kool

  kenna
01/09/09 (06:01 PM) 
this is a really good write 10 STARZ

  J3LLYB3AN
01/05/09 (11:31 AM) 
this is hella sweet nice job on this write your obviously a very caring person again very nice job hun

  A.C.H.
01/02/09 (08:45 PM) 
Awww... that is incredibly sweet! Sometimes a strong friendship is the foundation of an excellent relationship... I wish you well! Much luv! - "the inspired one"

  big_nasty114
12/21/08 (04:39 PM) 
i can tell u got mad feelinz 4 da dude. 10starz

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